Gazal : Do Ghari mayasser ho unka humsafer hona.

[Ram Mohandixit]

Do ghari mayasser ho unka hum safer hona
Phir hamain gavara hai der-bader hona.

Ek aazabe-pahem hai aise daure-bahshet main
Zindgi ke chehre per apna chasme-ter hona.

Ab to unke chahre pe bepana chehre hain
Kya ajab neymet thi verna bekhaber hona.

Unke vasl ki saahet hum pe aaye to jana
Kis ghari ko kehte hain khwab main baser hona.

[Sab_ka_pyara]

aapka Kavita ka chunaw boht umda hai

[Ram Mohandixit]

Hi Sub Ke Pyare Miyan,

Shukriya aapne Hamari pesh ki Gazal
ko pasand kiya. Aapne likha " aapke gazal
chunaw boht umda hai " maine ek baar
to samjha 'chuna' umda hai. Phir gaur kiya
samajh aaya. Khair
Aap kahte hain Chunaav acha hai per
members ka response favourable nahin
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