Kabhi maar ke jilayaa to kabhi jila ke maara

[Ram Mohandixit]

Kabhi maar ke jilaya to kabhi jila ke maara
Game zindgi ne mujhko koi kam diya sahara.

Mere dil main derde ulfet lab pe aaho naale
Mere chashmeter se jaari hai sirshke gam ka dhara.

Meri bekasi na pooncho meri bebasi na dekho
Meri dil ki dherkanen hain meri zisht ka sahara.

Na tabeeb ke ye jurret na maseeh kii ye himmat
Use kya jilaaye koi jise tere gam ne maara.

Koi unhee se poonche game ishq ki haqiqat
Ki jahaan gaya jahan main na mila kahin sahara.

[faiza66]

Wahhhh be hd khoobsoorat Ghazal share ki hya

Fantastic choice

thanks 4 sharing

[Sab_ka_pyara]

Kabhi maar ke jilaya to kabhi jila ke maara
Game zindgi ne mujhko koi kam diya sahara.

Mere dil main derde ulfet lab pe aaho naale
Mere chashmeter se jaari hai sirshke gam ka dhara.

Meri bekasi na pooncho meri bebasi na dekho
Meri dil ki dherkanen hain meri zisht ka sahara.

Na tabeeb ke ye jurret na maseeh kii ye himmat
Use kya jilaaye koi jise tere gam ne maara.

Koi unhee se poonche game ishq ki haqiqat
Ki jahaan gaya jahan main na mila kahin sahara.

Dixit ji, aapne aik sunder si kavita share ki hai jo prabhaveet karti hai,
jiske har shabd aur pankh me aakrashak dekhne ko
milta he,isi parakar ki post share karte rahiye
merey pitaji k dyant k sabab mai 1 mah se forum se door tha, unkee aatma shanti k liye uper walay se prathna zaroor karain..
khush rhain

[Kanch Ka Dil]

wah bahut piyari sharing..maza agiya perh ker. keep sharing

[Ram Mohandixit]

wah bahut piyari sharing..maza agiya perh ker. keep sharing

Shukriya Ranii Sahiba
aapne hamari pesh ki ghazal ko
tavajjo di aur sraha shukriya.
Kaanch ka dil likhte hue jara
jhijak hui, kahin toot na jaaye
raaaste main. so nice.

[Ram Mohandixit]

Dixit ji, aapne aik sunder si kavita share ki hai jo prabhaveet karti hai,
jiske har shabd aur pankh me aakrashak dekhne ko
milta he,isi parakar ki post share karte rahiye
merey pitaji k dyant k sabab mai 1 mah se forum se door tha, unkee aatma shanti k liye uper walay se prathna zaroor karain..
khush rhain

Shukriya aapne hamari pesh ki ghazal
pasandd ki aur daaad se nawaza.
Hamain aapke Pitaajee ke aakasmik
nidhan ka jaan ke behad dukh hua.
Hum Khuda se unki Aatma ki shaanti
tahe dil se Prarthna kerte hai aur
saabko is loss ko bear kerne ki
Shaqti (strength) ata karen. Ameen

[Ram Mohandixit]

Wahhhh be hd khoobsoorat Ghazal share ki hya

Fantastic choice

thanks 4 sharing

Shukriya Faiza,

Aapne hamari pesh ki ghazal
ko bahut pasnd kiya aur honsla afjayee ki.
Hum aapki shukraguzaar hai.Sada Khush raho.

[*Mini*]

bohot khoosurat ghazal hai...bara dard hai g iss main...na jaane kin halat mein likhi hogi yeh ghazal shayer ne...ALLAH (Subhana Wa Taala) saab ko sabr dey...Ameen Y Rabul Al Ameen