Afsana / Story ankhon ko char na kar...yuh bewajah khud ko barbad na kar :p

[*S.K*]

oye hoyeeeeeee minimi barey bary writters k comments aye hain lucky U

[xishan]

Very well captured...
maazrat main darassal kell par nahi saka got bz...
Likhti raha karain.... Practice makes perfect...

Acha hota agar Writers thora sa guide karte aur constructive criticism bhi karte

But anyways.. main iss qaabil nahi ke urdu main likhoon but English main thora bohet kaam chala hee lete hain....
aap mujh se zayda hee jaanti hongee... lekin likhne se zayda zaroori hay Parna... Aap novels and short stories, poetry zayda parain to aap khud ko mazeed familiarise ker sakain gee Literary techniques say....

A literary technique (also, literary device, procedure or method) is any element or the entirety of elements a writer intentionally uses in the structure of their work.

There are tens of techniques..... used at different times and places....For example one of the technique used here in this peice of writing is called... First Person Narration...

There are so many more and they have formal names.... but informally speaking there is one where you ask a question... to get the reader involved.... and keep the reader engaged (frequently used in articles)... using oxymoron using paradoxes... use of pauses to increase the tention...

Satire, exaggeration etc... and so on... Satire can be seen when you said.... aik Maa'n baap aur hazaron behn bhaai... what an excellent exaggeration... the writer highlights how the waiting outside the washroom feels like the wait is simply never ending...

Anyway the techniques depend on what you're writing, is it a short story, is it an article... is it a diary entry... is it poetry and so on.... in creative writing vivid description is used... you'll see the writer using very rich vocabulary...

Check out this Wikipedia article...

Literary technique - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

One more thing... if you're writing in urdu keep it all urdu... it'll look very nice and real... if the English and the Urdu are mixed it looks very informal.... Wassi shah often uses English words in his urdu poems

another thing that i forgot to mention is Observation... That is one of the fundamental and most important element in writing First thing is observation and then secondly how accuratly you describe it... A Comedians comedy is literally all based upon his Observation.

Other than the above are the technical factors such as use of commas, sentence structure, quotation marks, exclamation marks, spellings, grammar etc.. ( the language really depends on the character in the story)

Detail makes the difference between boring and terrific writing. It’s the difference between a pencil sketch and a lush oil painting. As a writer, words are your paint. Use all the colors.
Rhys Alexander

[*Mini*]

yeh writing likhne ka maan bhi aapki tehreer parke aya hai...thx 2 u sweety aur aapko bhi kuch kam cmt nahi arahe hai g hum saath saath hai lolxxx

oye hoyeeeeeee minimi barey bary writters k comments aye hain lucky U

[*Mini*]

wah g wah wikipedia cha gaya hai lolxxx
thx u so muchhhhh yahan ane ke liye aur cmt ke saath saath advise dene ke liye...mein ziada din se nahi likh rahi...sach bataoo to yeh meri dusri tehreer hai issi liye mujhe technically writing ka nahi pata...aur mein abhi khud ko talash kar rahi hoon ke mujhe kia ziada suit karta hai aur mujhe kaisse likhna hai...jo dil mein ata hai ussi tara likh deti hoon...aapki baat drust hai woh assal mein baat yeh hai ke meri urdu jo hai na woh complete nahi hai mujhe saab word nahi atey jo mein bayan karna chahti uska urdu word meri zubaan pa hote hote zubaan pa nahi ata...issi liye english mein likh deti hoon...insh'ALLAH writing se yeh bhi masla hal hojayega ahista ahista
next tym umeed karti hoon thori nahi yeh saab ko nazar mein rakh ke kafi improvement hojaye...let's see
ALLAH (Subhana Wa Taala) bless u

Very well captured...
maazrat main darassal kell par nahi saka got bz...
Likhti raha karain.... Practice makes perfect...

Acha hota agar Writers thora sa guide karte aur constructive criticism bhi karte

But anyways.. main iss qaabil nahi ke urdu main likhoon but English main thora bohet kaam chala hee lete hain....
aap mujh se zayda hee jaanti hongee... lekin likhne se zayda zaroori hay Parna... Aap novels and short stories, poetry zayda parain to aap khud ko mazeed familiarise ker sakain gee Literary techniques say....

A literary technique (also, literary device, procedure or method) is any element or the entirety of elements a writer intentionally uses in the structure of their work.

There are tens of techniques..... used at different times and places....For example one of the technique used here in this peice of writing is called... First Person Narration...

There are so many more and they have formal names.... but informally speaking there is one where you ask a question... to get the reader involved.... and keep the reader engaged (frequently used in articles)... using oxymoron using paradoxes... use of pauses to increase the tention...

Satire, exaggeration etc... and so on... Satire can be seen when you said.... aik Maa'n baap aur hazaron behn bhaai... what an excellent exaggeration... the writer highlights how the waiting outside the washroom feels like the wait is simply never ending...

Anyway the techniques depend on what you're writing, is it a short story, is it an article... is it a diary entry... is it poetry and so on.... in creative writing vivid description is used... you'll see the writer using very rich vocabulary...

Check out this Wikipedia article...

Literary technique - Wikipedia, the free encyclopedia

One more thing... if you're writing in urdu keep it all urdu... it'll look very nice and real... if the English and the Urdu are mixed it looks very informal.... Wassi shah often uses English words in his urdu poems

another thing that i forgot to mention is Observation... That is one of the fundamental and most important element in writing First thing is observation and then secondly how accuratly you describe it... A Comedians comedy is literally all based upon his Observation.

Other than the above are the technical factors such as use of commas, sentence structure, quotation marks, exclamation marks, spellings, grammar etc.. ( the language really depends on the character in the story)

Detail makes the difference between boring and terrific writing. It’s the difference between a pencil sketch and a lush oil painting. As a writer, words are your paint. Use all the colors.
Rhys Alexander

[baig g]

W Salam
bahut khoobsurat likha hai aap ne
pr aap bed se gir kion jati hain?aram se utha kren na!
thanks
keep sharing

[*Mini*]

hahaha aab kia bataoo...time dekh ke jatka aissa parta hai ke hosh hi nahi rehti ke uss waqt kahan hoon

W Salam
bahut khoobsurat likha hai aap ne
pr aap bed se gir kion jati hain?aram se utha kren na!
thanks
keep sharing

[*S.K*]

hahaha aab kia bataoo...time dekh ke jatka aissa parta hai ke hosh hi nahi rehti ke uss waqt kahan hoon

sedhi baat bataao, baba ji sey jhot na bolo wo apney moukalio k zariye sub pata kerwaliengay
baba ji ye bed sey iss liye giri thin k k bed per ulta soi thin yani jahan pair honey chaiye they waha in ka sir tha tu juldi mae ye sir ko pair sumjh ker sir k bal utar gain bed sey

[*Mini*]

g nahi main aapki tara nahi soti

sedhi baat baoun baba ji sey jhot na bolo wo apney moukalio k zariye sub pata kerwaliengay
baba ji ye bed sey iss liye giri thin k k bed per ulta soi thin yani jahan pair honey chaiye they waha in ka sir tha tu juldi mae ye sir ko pair sumjh ker sir k bal utar gain bed sey

[*S.K*]

g nahi main aapki tara nahi soti

maney bhi tu yehi kaha hai

[*Mini*]

uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu !!!!

maney bhi tu yehi kaha hai