Puranay Dino ka Dard.....

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:44 AM

Originally Posted by HUM*

veryyyyyyy nice

manzar kashi buhut kamal ki he

phir jaag utha hai dil mai puranay dino ka drd
ji chahtaa hai phir koi taza ghazl kahon

aur ghazal sohail bhai ne keh di aap ke badley

bohat shukriya jnab parnay aur comments dene ka

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:45 AM

Originally Posted by Kanch ki Mehroo

Assalam-o-Alaikum..

umdah tehreer rahi Farooq.. daad qubool farmaiye..

salamat rahiye

wa alaikum aslam
bohat shukriya jnab
daad qabool hoi jnab

dua k liye bohat bohat JazzakAllah

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:46 AM

Originally Posted by hermald_eyes

wah
beutifully written banjarey
bht acha likha hai yadain hmmmmm
keep it up
khush raho

rano bohat shukriya parhnay ka
yes yadain hi

dua k liye shukriya
jeo dher sara

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:47 AM

Originally Posted by wafa_75

bhttt achi tehreer hai ji.....

parhnay aur pasand karnay ka bohat shukriya

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:47 AM

Originally Posted by WorThless

umda likha hey likhtey rahyeh share kartey rahyeh

sohna bohat shukriya parhnay aur pasand karnay ka

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:48 AM

Originally Posted by shab e hijraan

tum aksar kaha karti thi k mai tumharya pass ho kr bh door hota hon, mgr tumhain kia maloom k teri qurbat mai bhi teri bhool bhalayon mai kho jaya karta tha

very nyc buhhat acha likha hay aap ne......God Bless U!!!

mamnoon hon apka k apnay parha aur apko pasand bhi aaya

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:50 AM

Originally Posted by Dying Inside

phir jaag utha hai dil mai puranay dino ka drd

wah kya baat hay...bohat khoob...bohat acha likha aap ne...

""tum aksar kaha karti thi k mai tumharya pass ho kr bh door hota hon, mgr tumhain kia maloom k teri qurbat mai bhi teri bhool bhalayon mai kho jaya karta tha, aksar apni khush naseebi pe ansoo aa jatay thay mgr ab badnaseebhi meri aankh k daryoon ko banjr kar chuki hai...""

theze linez r superb...

aaj bhi janana...
akela hon, halki barish hai, aur mai bheeg raha hon

wah kya baat hay...
aise hi likhte rahiye...
God Bless U Always..!!!

bohat shurkariya jnab
apko linez pasand ain samjho k mehnat wasool ho gai

jeo dher sara

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:52 AM

Originally Posted by ignited_mind

Wahh Banjara jee ....

Buhat umdah likha hai .. ..

very heart touching ...

aur parhtey huwey mujhey bhi aisa lag raha tha jaisey me waheen kaheen hoon

Really nice ...

and Thanks for sharing ..

Mint

parhnay ka bohat shukriay

hehe heart se likhi na to touching ban gai

aray ap ko bhi aisa laga

mujhay tabhi mehsoos howa tha k mujhy koi dekh raha hai

bohat shukriya jnab pasand krnay ka

jeo

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:53 AM

Originally Posted by zindagi jii

acha laga ap ko parh ke
MASHALLAH qalam aazmai se khob aashna hen aap
agli tehreer ka intezar rahe ga

aray
ina sara keemti lafzon ka khazana dene ka bohat shukriya

jeo dher sara

**Banjara** · 03-06-2011,08:54 AM

Originally Posted by XERIC

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mitr ji abbu chalay gaye

lolz@ marz e ishq
bohat shukriya jnab
apki raye ka hamesha hi intezar raha hai
bohat sara thnx