Novel Zindagi mein ek barr...Part 1

[*Mini*]

Assalamu aleikum wr wb, umeed karti hoon aap saab theek thak hai aur aapke halat ALLAH (Subhana Wa Taala) ki meherbani se khush aur khurram hai kuch din pehle ek kahani likhni start ki thi mene...uska pehla safa paish karne ayi hoon...umeed ke saath ke aapko yeh shurvat passand aye

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Zindagi mein bohot se lamhe aisse bhi atey hai jab insaan bezubaan hojata hai. Na khul ke sawal pooch sakta hai aur na hi koi jawab sun ne ki himat rehti hai uss mein. Gumsum se hayalon mein gumshuda aur giraftar hojata hai. Din, mahihney, saal to guzar rahe hote hai lekin woh wahin ka wahin rukh jata hai.

Aissa hi kuch Mini ke saath bhi huva...panch saal pehle ki baat hai...

Mini atharan barass ki thi jab England se pehli bar aapne waldain ke saath Pakistan gayi, aapni hi chacha-zat beti ki shaadi mein shamil hone ke liye.
December ka mahina tha. Thand kafi ho rahi thi. Saab ne chadar orri huvi thi aur sahen mein charpayi pa beth ke tchai pee rahe they. Mini aapni cousin ke saath baatein kar rahi thi aur aapne ass pass ke mahol ko aapni ankhon mein sama rahi thi. Sahen ke pass hi bawarchi khana tha aur uski bayi taraf ek nalka.
Wahan ek larka haat dho raha tha. Kad mein lamba, rang sawala aur jisamat "smart" si. Mini ussey pehchaan nahi pa rahi thi. Bass itna yakeen tha ke woh ussi ka koi cousin hai.
Haat dhone ke bad woh larka aapne kadam Mini ki taraf le chala. uski ankhein bass Mini ko hi dekkh rahi thi aur saath saath muskura bhi raha tha.
Jab samne poncha to dheemi awaaz mein kehne laga : "Kia baat hai Mini g ? Aapne mujhe pehchana nahi ? Main hi Rehaan hoon !".
Mini ki ankhein achanak chamakne lagi aur muskurake boli : "Aap Rehaan hai ?"
"Haan jee...main hi Rehaan hoon" ....

[faiza66]

Mini u Likhti bhi ho kya?
Woww Great

aur ye u ney apna Naam kyun Add kiya

Hmmmmmm Very Intresting

Waiting 4 Next Part

[*Mini*]

g sweety...mujhe imagine karna acha lagta hai aur jo imagine karti hoon woh kahani ban jati hai aap bhi try karo Radha...u ki story kafi funny banegi
har larki kissi na kissi larke ki Mini hoti hai...issi liye Mini naam rakha
insh'ALLAH jald next part ko post karoogi pehle likh to loo

Mini u Likhti bhi ho kya?
Woww Great

aur ye u ney apna Naam kyun Add kiya

Hmmmmmm Very Intresting

Waiting 4 Next Part

[faiza66]

g sweety...mujhe imagine karna acha lagta hai aur jo imagine karti hoon woh kahani ban jati hai aap bhi try karo Radha...u ki story kafi funny banegi
har larki kissi na kissi larke ki Mini hoti hai...issi liye Mini naam rakha
insh'ALLAH jald next part ko post karoogi pehle likh to loo

hmmmmm u kis lrkey ki mini ho?

na baba ye me key bs ki baat nahi

me ki funny nahi kuch aur hi bn jaaye gi

[*Mini*]

lolxxxx....abhi woh lucky larka mujhe mila hi nahi aapna dil khush karne ke liye khud ko Mini kehti hoon hahahaha

hmmmmm u kis lrkey ki mini ho?

na baba ye me key bs ki baat nahi

me ki funny nahi kuch aur hi bn jaaye gi

[*S.K*]

hmmm
achi koshish hai minimi
but "rasoi" or mini ki "or"r kadam ye match nahi ker rahey
neway simply gud try keep it up

[*Mini*]

thx a lot visit karne ke liye aur hamiyan batane ke liye
i know but meri samajh mein nahi a raha tha le kaisse likhoo...kitchen ko urdu mein kia kehte hai ? & how can i say "mini ki orr" ?

hmmm
achi koshish hai minimi
but "rasoi" or mini ki "or"r kadam ye match nahi ker rahey
neway simply gud try keep it up

[*S.K*]

u welcome
kitchen ko bawerchi khana khetey hain n
mini ki janib ya mini ki taraf likh saktey hain

[*Mini*]

change kar diya thx again ;)
ALLAH (Subhana Wa Taala) bless u

u welcome
kitchen ko bawerchi khana khetey hain n
mini ki janib ya mini ki taraf likh saktey hain

[Kanch Ka Dil]

ahaaaaaa acha likha hai...or mini ka naam bhi acha laga iss mai
likhti rahain asey hi