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This is a discussion on ~ Usey Ye Kon Samjhaey ..... Aatif Saeed ~ within the Artist & Designer's Clubs part of the Art & Artist's Forum category of Urdu Poetry / Shayari | Islamic Art | Al-Quran & Hadith | Book Download | Gup Shup & more, Pasand Karney ka shukria Queen ji .......!!! Originally Posted by Queen Victoria kafi taweel nazam hai cs ji aap nay khubsurati say compose ki bohat ... tags: allah, baat, islam, khuda, love
Bhai ji Aik poetry Designer her tarah k Design banata hey , Ishqiya Bhi, Samajai masail per bhi so its a blend of poetry ab masla ye hey k aap hamarey waisey designs pe comments daina pasand nahi kartey merey last kai designs ISHQIYA poetry pe base nai kartey aap ney just THANKS press kia or gaib wahan comments bantey they, Chaliye aik misal daita hoon plz c this thread:
Aap ney yahan koi comments nahi diye k aaj kal ka sab se bara masla yehi hey her gali her muhhaley main yehi ho raha hey, Dont take it very serious hum her tarah k design banatey hain but jab bhi ISHQIYA baney ga dhar liye jain gey .
Aap k comments ka shukria
Asalamo Alaikum Waseem,
Nahi tum dil pay lay gai hoo, if you look at the time that poem was posted (the link you provided) it was the time I was I had a new daughter born in my family, and if you remember it was also the time when I was in process of moving house, so your observation is not correct,I specifically and categorically reply to encourage islaahi poetry. And see the only last image you able to produce is not a month instead 3 months old, thats what my point is, the balance should be at least 50% ishqiya and 50% islaahi, obviously this is not something forced as designer design what they feel like designing, but point to make is:
- If we design ishqiya poetry, what we are giving away to the readers ? what effect we are leaving to readers?what we are making them? KUBRAY ASHIQ ?
- If we design Islaahi poetry, we are contributing to our country our society our friends, and it will help change overall attitude at least it will remind people life is about not lust, a girl or ishq or so called filthy love affairs instead there are other things to think about. I am not saying ishq have no imporance I am a strong believer of love, but I also believe love is not everything, specially when I read such poetry (I am sorry I hate reading poems like the one written and designed here), Because no mattars how professionally it is written, how good is the poet behind the thought, but the thought itself is cheap, and doesn't contribute to the society 1% positivity, instead such poetry is worst one can write to destroy the nation, because reading such poetry leave all -ve impressions, and with due respect to poet who I have a strong believe in that he can write to change thinking of our people, let me give few examples which made me furious when I read any such type of poetry:
"mere sochoon kay mehwar mein
tumharay bin mujhay yeah zindagi baykar lagti hai"
What above two lines are preaching that only one person is whole life, crap, life is not about the girlfriend/lover. This thought represent the thought of a Kubra Ashiq.
"Mere har din tumhari soch kay souraj say ugta hai
mere har shaam kay pehloo mein tum hee muskurati hoo
mere har raat karb e narasai say sulagti hai"
what is this ? "har" covers every single evening, day and night here, and what these three lines preaching ? what perception reader made out of these ? that wow man, this lust/love or what ever we name it for that one girl, she is everything ? no one else have any value anything in the life ? so what about siblings ? parents ? the problem is when poets cross the limits it that the point Islam haram the poetry, read surah shaura if in any doubt. Poetry should be realistic, and constructive or else this becoming one of the gunah e kabeera. I don't want to go into religious argument, because that will end up no where, but allow me to say put aside islam, or religion, by any standard of social values, or moral values, these three lines preaching to become a coward, and become a piece of... I don't call it poetry, I call it poison to kill the values of the reader specially the young generation.
"Agar mein khud say tum ko minha kar doon tu kuch nahi bachta"
Again, what is this line saying ? one message between the line is you are in me ! and 2nd saying if you are not in me or not part of me, i am nothing, or I left with nothing. Now this is complete rubbish, and just preaching fantasy, and this is the kind of poetry, which is the root cause of death of our intellectuals. All we are creating by preaching such thoughts is useless worthless thoughts with no drive to do anything positive and constructive in life.
I can give another half a dozen examples in this one poem, and honestly speaking I regard Atif a lot for his skills, but I always said to him Atif khuda kay liyeah kuch samaaji mozooaat pay likha karoo ho sakay tu, kiyon qoum ko kharab kar rahay hoo, aur mujhay aysa likhnay wallay har shayer say yeah hee shikayat hai, aur zahir baat hai aysee shayyree ko design karnaywaloon say bhi hai. Abhi kal he aatif say phone pay baat hoi tu uss ko yeah hee kaha kay bhai khuda kayliyeah Allah nay agar hunar diya hai tu yeah qarz hai ayzaaz nahi hai, naam nahi hai shuhrat he sab kuch nahi hai, iss hunar ko quom ki behtari kay liyeah istamaal karoo agar ho sakay tu. Magar Allah jissay chahta hai hidayat deta hai.
Merekoi baat burri lagi hoo tu mazrat, tah e dil say. Mera aitraz design pay bilkulbhi nahi hai design by any standard outstanding hai as always, mere wahid aaitraz selection of poetry pay hai, itni mehnat kissi achi shayeri pay hooti tu na sirf parhnay waloon ka bhala hoota balkay aysa kaam aap kay liyeah kuch kuja nahi sadqa e jariya ka kaam bhi karta.
Bahut hi achhe andaz se aap ne itni taweel nazam ko dezyn kiya hai
Mujhey wo zamana yaad aa yaga jab Urdu k paper main poetry di jati thi k bhai iski slees urdu karo to hum aisey hi kartey they jaisey aap ney ki .
Aapki Poori Post parhney k baad me is nateejey pe pohancha hoon k in sari baton ka reply POET hi dey saktey hain me nahi selection of poetry ka jahan tak sawal hey me wohi poetry design karta hoon jo mujhey achi lagey, I like this Poem so design it Aapka Point of View or ho sakta hey ( Jo k me changi tarah janta hoon :P ) Mera or, is issue pe hum aamney samney baith k lambi taqreerain v ker chukey hain, So Aatif Bhai hi aapko poetry k barey main ziyada behter bta saktey hain me ney Design karney ka jurm kia hey Judge sahab jo sazaa chahey de dain.
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