~ Usey Ye Kon Samjhaey ..... Aatif Saeed ~

[Aatif Saeed]

Asalamo Alaikum (again),

No comments, bcause, you are trying (yet again) to use tactics of creating wrong perceptions and making personal attacks, so thank you for your time as well, and be blessed. Allah swt hum sab ko hidayaat dai, haq baat kehnay aur suna'nay ki tofeeq dai, aur seedhi raah dikhaye, bay'shak Allah swt jissay chahta hai hidayat deta hai. Ameen

Wa.Salam
Basit

JazakAllah

Allah swt hum sab ko hidayaat dai, haq baat kehnay aur suna'nay ki tofeeq dai, aur seedhi raah dikhaye, bay'shak Allah swt jissay chahta hai hidayat deta hai. Ameen

[Aatif Saeed]

Assalam o alikum!
I m again reply in this thread but this time for the sake of learning. Yahan jo behas huee uss ne mairay dil per bht asar kia aur main ISLAHI poetry ki talash main nikal kharra hua. Door janay se pehlay socha jo Hazrat wa'az ker rahay hain unn ki poetry se aaghaaz kerta hooN q k aap mohtaram ISLAH e Muashra k baray da'aee aur sergerm e amal karkun hain. Uss poetry se kuch intekhaab yahan share kerta hooN ta woh mujhay samjha sakain k aisi ISLAHI poetry kaisay likhi jati hai. Mairay tu tamam misroon ki zaber10 salees urdu ki unhooN ne zarra apnay likhay ki tashreeh bhee ferma dain ta k hamm tiflaan e maktab ka bhalla ho jaee. Tu paish hain kuch ISLAHI poetry k namoonay.

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~**... Sahil Pay Basnay Wali Larki ...**~



Sahil Pay Basnay Wali Larki..
Khaboon Ke Khaitee Mut' Beejo..
Kaanch Say Nazuk Khawb Tumharay...
Thais Lagi Tu Kaya Karo Gi..
Akhiyoon Mein Yeah Chub Jayain Gai..
Sakhiyoon Nay Poocha Kaya Howa Hai..
Tu Kaya Kahoo Gi.. ?

"Ankh Mein Shaid Kuch Par Gaya Hai...!"

Ya Kuch Na Kaho Gi Chup He Rahoo Gi... ?
Par Khawb Kahaan Chup Rehtay Hain..
Un'Kahee Keh Daitay Hain..

Loug Sunnain Gai Tu Kaya Kahain Gain...
Awaaz Kasain Gai.. Taanay Dain Gai..

Tum Khushboo Say Mehki Komal Larki..
Kaya Lehjoon Kay Nashtar Seh Paoo Gee.. ?
Kaya Duniya Say Tum Takraoo Gi... ?

Kab Etnee Mohabbat Kar Paoo Gi..
Shaam Dhali Tu.. Pach'taoo Gi..

Sunoo...!
Sahil Pay Basnay Wali Larki..
Khawboon Ke Khaitee Mut' Beejo.. !!

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~**... Sayaad Mairay ...**~




...Sayaad Mairay Aab Azaad Na Kar...
...Youn Shehar e Dil Parbaad Na Kar...

...Bay'hal howa hon Hal tu daikh...
...Ishq Ka Ahani Jaal Tu Daikh...

...Chand Say Roshan Raat Tu Daikh..
...Rim Jhim Barsay Barsat Tu Daikh...

...Khushbo See Mehkee Galiyaan Hain...
...Iss Jeevan Say Lambi Rahain Hain...

..Samoo Lo Hum Ko Sansoon Mein...
...Bhaar Loo Apnee Bahoon Mein...

...Naa Chairh Rawajon Kaay Qisay...
...Yeh Tairay Hisay Na Mairay Hisay...

...Sun! Hijar Ke Aaj Baat Na Kar...
...Hara Howa Hoon Maat Na Kar...

...Sayaad Mairay Aab Azaad Na Kar...
...Youn Shehar e Dil Bar'baad Na Kar...

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~**... Pagal Larki ...**~


Neelay Asmaan Say Bhaagti
Surkh Gulaboon Ke Khawahish Liyeah
Oodi Badliyaan Sar Pay Oorhay
Shafaq Rung Mein Doobtay
Bad'naseeb Soura Ke Chah Mein

Woh! Ik Pagal Larki
Tareekiyoon Kay Safar Mein Hai... !!


(4)

~**... Yaddain ...**~


Tairi Yaddain...
Parbatoon say Utar Gaiee hain..
Shoor Machati.. Andaikhay Rastoon pay
Yadoon Kay Jazeeray Banati
Mujh Ko Tunha Choor Gaiyee Hain...

Samandar Kay Safar Pay Niklee
Tairi Yadoon Ka Safaid Rung
Waqat Kay Dharay mein Gadla Gaya Hai

Aur

Sar e Aaina Baitha Ik Udaas Panchi
Kissi Khoye Howay Ke Yaad Mein
Soo Gaya Hai...!!

Tu janab e mohtaram aain zarra ess ISLAHI poetry ki wazahat karain aur hamain seekhnay ka mauqa feraham kerain.

Khair andaish

Aatif Saeed

[Aatif Saeed]

Aur kuch bataeen na bataain iss islahi sher ki wazahat zaroor kee jiya ga

..Geeli maati ke khusboo karti hai bay'chain...
...Tarastay hoontoon ke tashngi tum hoo...

regards

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O My GOD ................ Kahan ki baat kahan Chali gai
Chill Bhai logo .......... Me k thread main inni behus kujh to me se dara karo yani k had hogai
ab to aik arsa hogaya Poetry Design kartey or her designer wohi design karta hey jo usko pasand ho, merey saath bhi aisa hi hey .
By Force Poetry me se to design nahi hoti yani koi kahey k ye design ker do to me k liye masla ho jata hey.
Meri aap dono se guzarish hey k relax karain Thanda pani piyen or me k agley designs ka wait karain.

Sarey thread ka satyanaas ho chuka hey me ney kuch nai kehna aap dono ko :(

Thanks

[Smiling Star]

Beautiful work
with a great poetry
Thanks for sharing
God Bless you

[na_de_em7]

Bahut Umda Work,

[Basit]

Mr. Atif, actions speaks louder than words, Actions shows one's class, thats what we have seen, I said several times again and again stop being personal and don't attempt character assassinations, but no you like years ago still like this. This discussion was about the type of filthy poetry (in my opinion) you wrote and not about you, I tried not to pass any personal remarks, but every single reply of your contained a personal attacked, expcept one where you had nothing but copy pasted what I wrote to you.

I did reminded you not to reply again in rage, but you did not listened (on purose I assume), as you like to flame this whole situation (like you did years ago), instead this case will be forward to Administrators (those not your friends or mine, or of designer of this poetry) and they will read and decide about your future on this community, till a decision is taken about your future stay at this community urdu world you are on temporary ban.

About what you posted above Yes! I wrote this several years ago, and unlike you I am not proud of it, and for many years now I am against all such type of poetry, I don't preach what I don't practice and I also believe it is better not to write filth at all instead of writing and becoming proud of that like you are. I also have an obligation to point it out.


Allah he Hafiz

[Basit]