Ghalib... a nazam by Gulzar

[Kanwal Hussain]

Bohat khoobsorat k
Raaz sweto...

[Hass]

Excellent work..................

[imported_mystique]

behad khoobsurat.........zabard ast frame work & lovely colours

[*Raaz*]

opsssssssss kyon g mere comments mein kya aysi khatarnak bat hoti hai.....??

thek main ainda sirf nice likh dia karon ga...............

i didnt mean so.. but aap bahut ache comments lekhte hain.. which i feel my work does not deserve.....

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wah jee wah app ka kam dhak kar sirf itna kahoon ga kay...................... .


akhir main kab itna acha saaf suthra kam karoon ga

arey zia jee aap ka kaam to mashAllah bahut hi nice aur neat hai even more than mne........ really...

so please be happy..............

[*Raaz*]

hogaa waseem bhaii aap ke liye..... maiN to behad naaraaz hooN ''Raaz'' bahan se kuoN ki ye is na-ilm bhaii ka khayaal to kabhii rakhtii hi nahiiN..

sooooooo sooooryyyyyyy balvinder bhaji....... didnt mean that.... ab shama bhi karden... koshish karongi k aisi ghalti ko dubara na duhraon.........
kya karen aadat se majboor hain to baar baar bhool jaate hain.....

chalen es nazam ka roman kuch yon hai....

Ghalib... by Gulzar

raat ko aksar hota hai, parwane aakar
table lamp ke gird ekkathey hojatey hain
suntey sr dhuntey hain
sun ke sab ashaar ghazal ke
jab bhi mein Deewan-e-Ghalib khol ke parhne bethta hon
subah kw phr deewan ke roshan safhon sy
parwanon ki raakh uthani parti hai!!

[*Raaz*]

v.nice poetry + image + colours.................. ......

thaaaaanks alot RIa...................... ......

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Wahh Hamesha Ki TArhan Aik Aur Aap Ka ZabARdast Design......Bohut Umda

thanks a bunch sl dear...
be happy for ever..................... .

[*Raaz*]

Bohat khoobsorat k
Raaz sweto...

bahut shukrya kanwal dear..................... .

[*Raaz*]

behad khoobsurat.........zabard ast frame work & lovely colours

thanks mystique for liking................... ....