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    This is a discussion on ?? ??? ?? ???? ??? within the Poet's Club - (Publish Your Poetry) part of the Shayari / Urdu Poetry category of Urdu Poetry / Shayari | Islamic Art | Al-Quran & Hadith | Book Download | Gup Shup & more, Pather k khuda ho tum main mom ki murat hoon. Jo pighal jai nigahon se us burf ki surat hoon. Tum khud hi chale tanha ... tags:

      
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      Pather k khuda ho tum main mom ki murat hoon.
      Jo pighal jai nigahon se us burf ki surat hoon.

      Tum khud hi chale tanha hum roka kie tum ko.
      Go na bhi karo inkar main tumhaari zarurat hoon.

      Ik aag ka tufan hai seene ke sumander main .
      Jo apni lipat main le us shole ki hiddat hoon .
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      Manzure nazar bun k palkon main base jaon .
      Dill jis k kare sujde aisi hi ebadut hoon .

      Aine se phir na main ye bat kabh puchoon.
      Gar khud hi sunam kahdo main khub surat hoon.

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      bohat achi gazal likho hai ap ne
      thanks 4 sharing

      میں نے انسانوں سے متاثر ہونا چھوڑ دیا ہے۔ انسان وہ نہیں ہوتے جو دکھائی دیتے ہیں۔

       

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      Nice poetry, posted in wrong place..................it should be posted in Shair O Shaery or should be moved into that section.

       

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      hey guys shes new on urdu world.. i helped her out n told her where to post her next ghazal so it will be in the right section next time.. nice poetryy kiran baji
      ~ Teri ulfat ne mohabbat meri aadat ker di ~
       

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      Asslam O Alaikum,

      Welcome to UW Kiran... its our virtual home. so stay with us and enjoy posting

      wah wah bahut umdah likha hai...daad qabool kijiye...and next ap apni likhi hoi poetry Poet Club mai share kijiye ga..mai isko wahin move ker rahi hoon....apko kisi bhi kisam ki help chahiye toh ap mujey ya kisi bhi admin ko PM ker dain ya help section mai thread laga ker bata dain...Inshallah hum pori help karain gey

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      O bey khaber !!!
      kuch toh hey tujh se Rabta
      kasey hum janain humey kiya pata

      ye meri wafa ki hain wehshatain mujay ikhtiyar-e-janoo nahi
       

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