eik ajnabi ney...

[mahjabeen_kamran]

<span style='font-size:14pt;line-height:100%'>eik ajanbi ney aa key
dil pey marham rukh di...

sukhey hoey patoo pey
barish ki kaii bondein gira dein

meri hatheli ko isterha thama usney
key mujhey mujh sey begana ker key
eik nai roshan mishal dey di

ab woh meri zaat mein hai
jis ney mujhey nai zindagi dey di</span>

[SAGARKHAN]

<!--QuoteBegin-mahjabeen_kamran+Dec 7 2003, 03:31 AM--></div><table border='0' align='center' width='95%' cellpadding='3' cellspacing='1'><tr><td>QUOTE (mahjabeen_kamran @ Dec 7 2003, 03:31 AM)</td></tr><tr><td id='QUOTE'><!--QuoteEBegin--> <span style=&#39;font-size:14pt;line-height:100%&#39;>eik ajanbi ney aa key
dil pey marham rukh di...

sukhey hoey patoo pey
barish ki kaii bondein gira dein

meri hatheli ko isterha thama usney
key mujhey mujh sey begana ker key
eik nai roshan mishal dey di

ab woh meri zaat mein hai
jis ney mujhey nai zindagi dey di</span> [/b][/quote]
bohut khoob,,,,,,,,,,,,,,, :good ping

[BEWAFA]

v nice dear

[NoMiX]

hmmm achii koshish hai ... likhte rahiye saath mein alfaaz kay chunao per mazeed tawujja dejiye ... amateur nazm kehnay waloon kay liye aik achii tip ye hai keh shuru mein english verse kay kisi bhee determined meter (poetic rhythm) ko base bana ker nazm kahain ya nazm kehnay kay baad set ker lain, ahista ahista alfaaz kay chunao kay baray main khud ba khud andaaza honay lagay ga keh kon sa lafz istimaal keya jaye ya line main kitnay alfaaz istimaal keye jayain ... apna khayaal rakhiye ga, F