EK PAL KA SAWAAL HAI BABA.....(GHAZAL)

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Ye ghazal dobara post kar raha hun
it was lost becoz of the site problems...!


Ek pal ka sawaal hai baba
Bemaar boht behaal hai baba

Is qadar hai bad gumani
Janay kis ki chaal hai baba

Tera tasavur, ruup, saraapa
Apna yehi to maal hai baba

Sab k apne kaaj aur dhanday
Ham ko tera khyaal hai baba

Baqi sab hain maati kankar
Aik tu he to laal hai baba

Be-zaar huay ho zafar ji se
Tum ne kia kamaal hai baba

[Rrahi]

Zafar shaib, achi koshish hay.rhythm par mazeed tawajju dein.
keep it up.
thanx for sharing.

[Tasnim Salma]

Moaaf kero baba ...(Just kidding).
You have portrayed your thoughts in a very good manner.Some lyrics are really good.Under ki sab talkhiyan khobsorti se bahir nikalna bhe aik art hai n u r successful in doing this in a comic n light way.Nice one.

[*Pehli_Barish*]

buhat umdah.......

[zaf]

Moaaf kero baba ...(Just kidding).
You have portrayed your thoughts in a very good manner.Some lyrics are really good.Under ki sab talkhiyan khobsorti se bahir nikalna bhe aik art hai n u r successful in doing this in a comic n light way.Nice one.

dhutkartay ho haqarat se faqeeron ko
apni zulf k be-gharz aseeron ko
dil e zafar ka darr band ho gya to phir
hilatay reh jao ge tum zanjeeron ko...!(just kidding) : )

tareef ka boht shukrya

[zaf]

buhat umdah.......

buhat shkrya.......

[zaf]

Zafar shaib, achi koshish hay.rhythm par mazeed tawajju dein.
keep it up.
thanx for sharing.

boht shukrya RAHI shb!
I'll try to do better.

[Govind Gulshan]

umda khayalat hai.n aapke
jinhei.n aapne ash'aar mei.n Dhaala hai
koshishi.n jaari rakhei.n

eik she'r mulahiza farmaaei.n

rawaanii kii zaruurat hai kaho darya kii lehro.n se
palaT kar jab idhar aaei.n to ghuNghruu baaNdh kar aaei.n

[Abdus Samad Shaikh]

Bahot umda khayal pesh kiya hy aap ne
Very nice sharing

Khush raho aabad raho

God bless you

[زیرک]

Bohat umda
daad hazir e khidmat hai
Share karne ka shukriya
Khush rehiye