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  • EK PAL KA SAWAAL HAI BABA.....(GHAZAL)

    This is a discussion on EK PAL KA SAWAAL HAI BABA.....(GHAZAL) within the Poet's Club - (Publish Your Poetry) part of the Shayari / Urdu Poetry category of Urdu Poetry / Shayari | Islamic Art | Al-Quran & Hadith | Book Download | Gup Shup & more, Ye ghazal dobara post kar raha hun it was lost becoz of the site problems...! Ek pal ka sawaal hai baba Bemaar boht behaal hai ... tags:

      
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    1. Be-zaar huay ho zafar ji se.....(GHAZAL) 
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      Ye ghazal dobara post kar raha hun
      it was lost becoz of the site problems...!


      Ek pal ka sawaal hai baba
      Bemaar boht behaal hai baba

      Is qadar hai bad gumani
      Janay kis ki chaal hai baba

      Tera tasavur, ruup, saraapa
      Apna yehi to maal hai baba

      Sab k apne kaaj aur dhanday
      Ham ko tera khyaal hai baba

      Baqi sab hain maati kankar
      Aik tu he to laal hai baba

      Be-zaar huay ho zafar ji se
      Tum ne kia kamaal hai baba
       

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      Zafar shaib, achi koshish hay.rhythm par mazeed tawajju dein.
      keep it up.
      thanx for sharing.
       

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      Moaaf kero baba ...(Just kidding).
      You have portrayed your thoughts in a very good manner.Some lyrics are really good.Under ki sab talkhiyan khobsorti se bahir nikalna bhe aik art hai n u r successful in doing this in a comic n light way.Nice one.
       

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      buhat umdah.......
       

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      Quote Originally Posted by Tasnim Salma View Post
      Moaaf kero baba ...(Just kidding).
      You have portrayed your thoughts in a very good manner.Some lyrics are really good.Under ki sab talkhiyan khobsorti se bahir nikalna bhe aik art hai n u r successful in doing this in a comic n light way.Nice one.
      dhutkartay ho haqarat se faqeeron ko
      apni zulf k be-gharz aseeron ko
      dil e zafar ka darr band ho gya to phir
      hilatay reh jao ge tum zanjeeron ko...!(just kidding) : )

      tareef ka boht shukrya
       

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      Quote Originally Posted by Harry Potter View Post
      buhat umdah.......
      buhat shkrya.......
       

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      Quote Originally Posted by Rrahi View Post
      Zafar shaib, achi koshish hay.rhythm par mazeed tawajju dein.
      keep it up.
      thanx for sharing.
      boht shukrya RAHI shb!
      I'll try to do better.
       

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      umda khayalat hai.n aapke
      jinhei.n aapne ash'aar mei.n Dhaala hai
      koshishi.n jaari rakhei.n

      eik she'r mulahiza farmaaei.n


      rawaanii kii zaruurat hai kaho darya kii lehro.n se
      palaT kar jab idhar aaei.n to ghuNghruu baaNdh kar aaei.n
       

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      Bahot umda khayal pesh kiya hy aap ne
      Very nice sharing

      Khush raho aabad raho

      God bless you
       

    10. Re: Be-zaar huay ho zafar ji se.....(GHAZAL) 
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      Bohat umda
      daad hazir e khidmat hai
      Share karne ka shukriya
      Khush rehiye
       

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