ishq ka rasta

[CHAAND_AUR_BAADAL]

SALLAM TO ALL

aik chooti si koshish hai balke koshish kiya hai aise hi bethe bethe kuch likhne ko ji chaha to likh diya /khikhi

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yeh rasta ishq ka rasta hai

dushwar bhi hai aasan bhi hai

is raah pe chalne waloon ko

jab piyar kisi ka milta hai

dil moom kabhi ban jate hain

aur dukh ke kante chun chun ker

pather ke bhi ho jate hain

is raah ki baatain na poocho

is dard ka kissa rehne do

yeh aisi dagar hai ulfat ki

her pal safar main rehte hain

aur dill per chaale sehte hain

yeh ishq ke rahi lafzoon ko

tasweer bana ke takte hain

aur piyaar ke koomal lehje main

yeh geet wafa ke sunte hain

yeh dil main laga ke wasal ke phool

hijar ke kaante chunte hain

chehre pe sajate hain appne

ik dard bhari piyari muskaan

aur annkhh kabhi bhar aaye to

ashkoon ko chupaate rehte hain

yeh hijar ki phaili baanhoon main

soote hain sakoon se kiu aise ?

aur wasl phailaye daman to

yeh qurbat se ghabraate hain?

kaise yeh deewane hote hain

jo ishq main doobe rehte hain

her pal her lamha her ik main

yeh aik hi chehra takte hain

take care all of u

ALLAH HAFIZ

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[withlove]

wah wah .. bohat khoob sahib... pehli hi uraan itni oonchi bhari hai to parwaaz ka andaza hum khud hi kiye letay hein ... bohat khoob... mazeed ka intazar rahay ga... @};-

wafa aur dua ke saath
withlove @};-

[Shagufta Basit]

wah bohat khoob

bohat passand aaya app ka kalam

khush raheye
likhte raheye

[Daanie]

buhut khoob..

[Raakh]

Very nicoo COB, dil khool ker likh dia hay

and withlove u signature is very good too

[ZarNain]

yeh dil main laga ke wasal ke phool
hijar ke kaante chunte hain

Well said

[CHAAND_AUR_BAADAL]

ASALLAM O ALIKUM

hmmmmmmmmm/khikhi
meri yeh aik chooti si koshish app sab ko pasand aayi us ke liye behad
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app ne itni hosla afzai ki abb sooch rehi hon k kuch aur likhne ki bhi himat keron ;;)
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take care
ALLAHHAFIZ

[GHAZAAL]

hmmmm buhaaaat khub janab kya ravani hay /good1 buhaat pasand aii aap ki nazum.

[Diya]

kaise yeh deewane hote hain
jo ishq main doobe rehte hain
her pal her lamha her ik main
yeh aik hi chehra takte hain

/welcome1 to Poet's Club

aap ki nazam bauhat hi khoob hai...flow bhi bauhat acha hai aur khayal bhi /rose

khush rahiyai

[dil hai ke dia hai]

[B]ahaaan
really nice /clap5 [/B]