Jaan.

[shakeel shaiki]

Main to kerta hoon wafa jaan mera kaam yehi hai.
Jeeta kabhi merta hoon sada jaan mera anjaam yehi hai.

Na koi khawab mere dil main na koi geet khushi ka.
Ghum ki sergum hi suna jaan mera inaam yehi hai.

Koi deewana koi pagal kahay koi aawara mujhay.
Teri justujoo nay hi diya jaan mera naam yehi hai.

Khushk honton ko talab thi shabnamee qatron ki.
Dukh ka sagar hi mila jaan mera jaam yehi hai.

Dheeray dheeray baras kay khaali ho jaye shaiki yeh nazar.
Koi mausam bhi na bacha jaan mera aaraam yehi hai.

[~*Atta*~]

hmm achi koshish kee hai, likhtay raho insha'allah aur bhi behtar ho jaaye ga.
eldone

[rida_e_noor]

hmmmmmm...nice effort... /theek

[BigDaddyCool]

HI, YAR BAUHAT HI ACCHA RADEEF LAYE HAIN AAP. PEHLE SHER KA PEHLA MISRA IS FANTASTIC.