..... Main Ne To Samjha Tha

[Izza Sheikh]

Sabhii sathyon ki khidmat mein
Asslam o Alaikum wa rematullah
umed hai app sab khariyat se hon ge ,
Qita paish kar rahi hon , umed karti hon app apne qeemtii waqt mein se
kuch waqt nikal kar apni qeemti raaye se navaazein ge , shukrya ....

Main Ne To Samjha Tha Usay BhooL Jaon Gii
Magar Zaalim Chaahat Ka Asar BaaQii Hai
Dar Saa Nayaa Rehta Hai Rusvaayon Ka IZZAH
Shaiyed Qazaa Se Pehle Abhi Hashar BaaQii Hai ...!

[Banjara]

bohat umda likha hai
ravani k sath
khiyal achoota hia
dheeron daad apkay liye
likhti rahain

[baig g]

W Salam
Wow... Good job bahut umdah likha hai
nice one
keep sharing
thanks

[Syed Ehsan Ur Rehman]

acha likha hay
aur acha likhain gi insha allah
apnay takhallus par tawajjah farmaaen
aesa takhallus istamal karain jo k ba mainay ho..

[*S.K*]

nice sharing

[*Mini*]

waleikumu salaam wr wb,
theek hon na hon aap hum saab ko aapni dua mein zarur yaad rakhiega
aapki Qita bohot achi hai dear...advice ke torr pa aapko yahi kahugi ke agar aap :

- 1st line mein 'tumhein' use karti hai to 2nd line mein 'tumari chahat' likhe...Qita aur lajawab hojayegi

maine to samjha tha tumhein bhool jaoogi
magar tumari chahat ka assar baaqi hai

- aap 2nd line mein agar 'teri' chorey aur 1st line mein 'tumhein' ko 'tujhe' se badal dey to bhi best hai ;)

maine to samjha tha tujhe bhool jaoogi
magar teri chahat ka asar baqi hai



khair yeh meri point ov view...agey jo aapko theek lagey Qita to aap hi ki hai
keep sharing & ALLAH (Subhana Wa Taala) bless u

Sabhii sathyon ki khidmat mein
Asslam o Alaikum wa rematullah
umed hai app sab khariyat se hon ge ,
Qita paish kar rahi hon , umed karti hon app apne qeemtii waqt mein se
kuch waqt nikal kar apni qeemti raaye se navaazein ge , shukrya ....

Main Ne To Samjha Tha Tumhein BhooL Jaon Gii
Magar Tairii Chaahat Ka Asar BaaQii Hai
Dar Saa Nayaa Rehta Hai Rusvaayon Ka IZZA
Shaiyed Qazaa Se Pehle Abhi Hashar BaaQii Hai ...!

[Izza Sheikh]

bohat umda likha hai
ravani k sath
khiyal achoota hia
dheeron daad apkay liye
likhti rahain

App ka bohat bohat shukria keh
app ne bharpoor hasla afzai farmai , bohat duain app ke liye .....

[Izza Sheikh]

W Salam
Wow... Good job bahut umdah likha hai
nice one
keep sharing
thanks

bohat shukria janab,
shaar rahiye

[Izza Sheikh]

acha likha hay
aur acha likhain gi insha allah
apnay takhallus par tawajjah farmaaen
aesa takhallus istamal karain jo k ba mainay ho..

INSHAALLAH....app ki haosla afzai or
rehnumai mujh nacheez ke sath hai ,
duaon ki darkhwast karti hun, takhallus ke baaray mein zroor sochon gi,
shaad rahen abaad rahen .....

[Izza Sheikh]

nice sharing

bohat shukria .........
shaad rahen.....