Mein Janta Nahi...

[Cats-]

mein janta nahi mein kyun ban gaya hon aisa
na mujhe tujh se khushi mile hai, na kisi aur se sakoon

ik mulaqat pehle tha jaisa tera hum-nasheen
ab na us mein raha hai woh jazba, na hi woh janoon

sunna nahi chahta us zamanay main ab koi jo
suna raha hon main aise woh mazmoon

mujhe jo apni had mein rehne ko kehte hain, keh do unhein
ke tor ta hon roz main aise hazaron qanoon

tanha chor diya apnon ne mujhhe
na mein tha gair, na mein aflatoon


hope everyone likes it, actually jo akhri lafz hai "aflatoon" mere khayal se suit nahi ho raha, please agar ap log mujhe us ke bajaye jo lafz suit karta hai bata dein takay poem complete ho jaye..

[Jannu]

acha likhaa hai Aap ne hmm end ka hmm yes aflaton ajeb hi lag rha hai:P
hmm aap is ki jagah

na mein tha gair, na mein Aap ka khoon (blood)

hows that?

[Cats-]

hhhmm thanks for the suggestion..

dekhte hain agar dusron ki pas bhi koi suggestion hai..

[Diya]

cats achi kavish hai aap ki /rose

hmmm aflatoon kai bajai kaun sa lafz suit karai ga i think jannu ki suggestion sahi hai

khush rahiyai

[Cats-]

diya ji glad to know u liked it..

theek hai phir wohi sahi rahe gi.. jaanu ji shukriya.. /yhug