Muqabla-e-Tarahi Ghazal.. July - 2012..

[Kanch ki Mehroo]

Assalam-o-Alaikum..

umeed hai k aap sab khairiyat say hoN gay..

is maah muqabla-e-tarahi ghazal k liye jis misray ka intikhab kiya gaya hai.. woh is sh'air ka misra-e-sani hai;

mujh ko meri hi udaasi say nikaalay koi..
"maiN mahabbat hooN, mahabbat ko bacha lay koi..!"

qawafi: bacha, saja, utha, dila waghaira..
Radeef: lay koi

aap apni kawishaat 25th July tak yahaN isi thread maiN post kar saktay haiN.. nataaij ka ailaan hamaray mohtaram judges ki marking ki bina par kiya jayega..

so jaldi say kaghaz qalam thaamiye.. aur aik shandaar si ghazal keh dijiye..

salamat rahiye
UW Intazamiya..

[*Muskaan*]

Walaikum Assalam,

Thank YOu so much Mehreen

Beautiful contest.
Looking forward for members valuable sharings..

Regards
Muskaan

[Abdus Samad Shaikh]

Walekumsalaam

bahot acha shair intekhab kiya hy aap ne.....Insha Allah will try....ye shair me typing mistake hy shayd

mujh ko meri hi udaasi say nikaalay koi..
"maiN mahabbat hooN, mahabbat ho bacha lay koi..!" Yahan mahabbat Ko bacha lay koi....

[*S.K*]

walekum alsalam warehmat ullaha

sir sey guzr gaya hai Aa key sumjha ley koi
ghazal khud likhni hai ya copy past kara ley koi ??
itni mehnat kon karey jaker judges ko hi pata ley koi
apni si koshish kar dekhiengay ziyada umeed na laga ley koi

:adab

sukhriya dede i'll try

[NeemBismil]

Aik Ghazal Ap Hazraat K Zoq Ki Nazr Krny Nacheez Chand Naqis Ash'aar Ky Sath Hazir Hai. Ap Ki 2 Minute Ki Tawajjh Mere Liye Musarrat Ka Ba'is Hogi.

Behr: Behr E Ramal Musamman Makhboon Mahzoof Maqtoo

Arkaan: Faa'ilaatun Fa'ilaatun Fa'ilaatun Fe'lun ??????? ?????? ?????? ????

Ghazal Mulahiza Ho:

Doob Na Jaaon Kahin Mujh Ko Sanbhaalay Koi,
Ab Mujhay Is Shab E Zulmat Se Nikaalay Koi.

Har Koi Naam E Jafa Leta Nazar Aata Hai,
Mein Muhabbat Hun Muhabbat Ko Bachaalay Koi.

Dil Mein Tou Bughz Ko Lay Kar Kay Har Ik Betha Hai,
Chehray Pay Jhoota Tabassum Hi Sajaa Lay Koi.

Thokarain Khaakay Bhi Tayyaar Huwa Bethaa Hoon,
Khaak Phir Aakay Meri Aankh Mein Daalay Koi.

"Ab Isay Tum Hi Sanbhaalogay" Ye Keh Kar Hamko,
Chal Diya Karke Muhabbat Kay Hawaalay Koi,

Ye Bhi Such Hai Kay Mein Khud Apna Pasandeedah Hun,
Phir Bhi Itna Nahi Kay Dil Mein Basaa Lay Koi.

Shehr Kay Shehr Mein Fuqdaan-E-Shanaasai Hai,
Ab Kahaan Deta Hai Sonay Kay Niwaalay Koi.

Itni Khuaahish Thi K Raahon Mein Ye Kaantay Naa Hon,
Kab Ye Chaha Tha Kay Palken Hi Bichaalay Koi.

Is Kharaabay Mein "Main" Bay-Satt Sa Paraa Hun BISMIL,
Rehm Khaakar Mujhe Aakar Ke Uthaalay Koi.


Ap K Qeemti Waqt Ka Shukria.
Duaaon Ka Taalib: Muzammil Shaikh Bismil.
Wassalam!

[Abdus Samad Shaikh]

Dosto, diye gaye Tarhi Misray par main nay bhi tab'a-azmai ki hay, koi na koi misra tu pasand aahi jaayega.


Dost ban ker meri dunya ko sanbha lay koi
"Me mohabbat hun mohabbat ko bacha lay koi"

Pardah e Husan me rehti hy mohabbat meri
Shoq e didar hy to pardah hata lay koi

Din to guzra hy sara soch ke sannaton me
Sham hy fiqr ki ab shama jala lay koi

Mosam e gul hy gulshan me bhi bahar aayi hy
Hasrat e gul hy ke zulfon me saja lay koi

Jung e ulfat agar ham haar chuke bhi to kiya
Gham na hoga hamain gar jashn mana lay koi

Kashti e gham kahin takraye na lahron se
Bus tamanna hy ke sahil se laga lay koi

Me mohabbat hun kamseen hum bahot nazuk hun
Rooth jaoun agar to badh ker mana le koi

Baat koi jo ban jati ho isharon me hi
Aarzu hoti hy phir apna bana lay koi

Hy rah ishq me her su hi 'Samad andhera
Aik diya aas ka rastay me jala lay koi

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[Ghulam Haider]

Dosto aadaab !
Aaj maiN poet's club maiN aik ghazal post karne aayaa tha, tabhi meri nigaah is thread par bhi paRi aur dil meN shuq baRha ke kyoN na maiN bhi kuchh asha'ar kahooN, ba har Haal ye chand asha'ar aap ki naz'r kar rahaa hooN jo bilkull taazah haiN...

Mujh ko nafrat se zamaane ki nikaale koie. MaiN moHabbat hooN moHabbat ko bachaa le koie. Zindagi kya hai samajh ne ke liye kaafi hai, Do ghaRi paas mujhe apne biThaa le koie. Uns mujh se bhi kisi ko ho ke insaan hooN maiN, Mujh ko dhaRkan ki TaraH dil meN basaa le koie. Gungunaataa hoN maiN ulfat ke taraane tanhaa, Meri aawaaz meN aawaaz milaa le koie. Ya to aisaa ho ke meraa hi koie ho jaaye, Ya phir aisaa ho mujhe apnaa banaa le koie. Aag lagni hai jo dil meN to ho kyoN nafrat ki, Ishq ki aag na kyoN dil meN lagaa le koie. Zindagi kuchh bhi nahiN is meN agar pyaar nahiN, Apne dil meN bhi ye iHsaas jagaa le koie. Hamsafar koie to ho raah meN apnaa Haider, Pyaar se aa ke gale mujh ko lagaa le koie.

[baig g]

Bahut achi activity hai KKM
aaj to nahi InshaAllah Mon ko kuch karen gay!
thanks
khush rahen hmesha

[baig g]

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Assalam-o-Alaikum
Aik Adna si koshish hmari janib se bhi hazir hai!


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Ab to weraan zindagi ka bhoj,utha lay koi
Main bhatak raha hon,mujhay hamsafer bana lay koi

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Is se pehlay kay mera wajood khatam ho jaye
Mujh ko dukhon kay bhanwer se nikalay koi

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Mera wajood ab bura lagnay laga hai zmanay ko
Main muhabbat hon,muhabbat ko bacha lay koi

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Ik umer se hon azmayeshon main ghira howa
Kaash!ab na kisi mushkil main daalay koi!

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Dil ko hasrat hai,mera gham bhi koi bantay
Meri khatir bhi do,chaar ashk baha lay koi!

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Jaan bhoj ke banay hain kharedaar hum ghamon ke
Aa kay ker day mujhay dukhon kay hawalay koi!

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Ik aas hai,ik hasrat hai meray dil ko!
Main bikher chuka hon mujhay aa k sanbhalay koi

[~Annie~]

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