Nateeja ....Muqabla-e-Tarahi Ghazal.. July - 2012.

[Kanch Ka Dil]

Asslam O Alaikum,

umeed hai ap sab dost khariyat se hon gey..result mai dair hoi iski mazrat khwan hoon....Pakistan mai light ki be hud load shading ki waja se Judges marking time per na ker sakey.

ji toh ab atey hain winner ghazal ki taraf....July 2012 ka muqabla jeetney waly dost hain

Ghulam Haider
winner ghazal

Mujh ko nafrat se zamaane ki nikaale koie.
MaiN moHabbat hooN moHabbat ko bachaa le koie.

Zindagi kya hai samajh ne ke liye kaafi hai,
Do ghaRi paas mujhe apne biThaa le koie.

Uns mujh se bhi kisi ko ho ke insaan hooN maiN,
Mujh ko dhaRkan ki TaraH dil meN basaa le koie.

Gungunaataa hoN maiN ulfat ke taraane tanhaa,
Meri aawaaz meN aawaaz milaa le koie.

Ya to aisaa ho ke meraa hi koie ho jaaye,
Ya phir aisaa ho mujhe apnaa banaa le koie.

Aag lagni hai jo dil meN to ho kyoN nafrat ki,
Ishq ki aag na kyoN dil meN lagaa le koie.

Zindagi kuchh bhi nahiN is meN agar pyaar nahiN,
Apne dil meN bhi ye iHsaas jagaa le koie.

Hamsafar koie to ho raah meN apnaa Haider,
Pyaar se aa ke gale mujh ko lagaa le koie.

apko bahut bahut mubarak ho

inaam key tour per apko 1000 rep points diye ja rahye hain..jo keh apki profile mai add ker diye jain gey

baqi sab participants ka bhi bahut bahut shukria....ap sab ko bhi 300 each rep points diye ja rahey hain

issi terhan part leatey rahiye...UW ki ronqaoon mai izafa kijiye

khush rahain abad rahain

Waslam
kanch ka dil

[kiran_habib]

Kanch ka dil
Asslamualycum ye muqabla kab our kaisa hota hai mujhay bhi zaroor batain pleas
main aapsub k liye nai hoon kion k main U W F ki bhi nai member hoon
Thank you Allah hafiz
Kiran Habib

[*Muskaan*]

Assalam Alaikum

Welcome to UW

Yeh muqabla..har maah start kiya jatha hai...
InshALlah Sept 1st week main..dobara shuru kiya jayega.
rules ke lihaz se , aap apni sharing post keejiyega.
Just keep visiting this section..Looking forward to read your sharings
Thanks
Hope you have a good time here.
Humesha Khush rahiye.

Kanch ka dil
Asslamualycum ye muqabla kab our kaisa hota hai mujhay bhi zaroor batain pleas
main aapsub k liye nai hoon kion k main U W F ki bhi nai member hoon
Thank you Allah hafiz
Kiran Habib

[*Muskaan*]

Walaikum Assalam Noor sis


Assalam Alaikum

Bahut Mubarak aapko Ghulam Haider ji
Indeed well deserved...beautiful sharing.
Keep sharing and keep participating
Humesha Khush rahiye

[Haya n]

Ghulam Haider Sahib Itni Umda Ghazal Likhney Or Is Shandaar Kamiyabi Par Dili Mubarakbaad Qubool Kijiye...

[Kanch Ka Dil]

Asslam O Alaikum,

abhi kal tak Aug k contest ki thread lag jaey gi...and wo yahi per top per ho gi...mai apko PM bhi ker don gi...bahut khushi ho gi apki participation sey...zaroor kijiye ga

Waslam

Kanch ka dil
Asslamualycum ye muqabla kab our kaisa hota hai mujhay bhi zaroor batain pleas
main aapsub k liye nai hoon kion k main U W F ki bhi nai member hoon
Thank you Allah hafiz
Kiran Habib

[kute muskaan]

Asslam O Alaikum,

abhi kal tak Aug k contest ki thread lag jaey gi...and wo yahi per top per ho gi...mai apko PM bhi ker don gi...bahut khushi ho gi apki participation sey...zaroor kijiye ga

Waslam

Kanch Ka DIL

apne mukabla tarahi ghazal September ki post ki hay... mujhay samajh nahi aya really

misra-tarah

tum hamei.n zehar pila do to maza aa jaaye
(John Ailiya)

qawaafii---dua,saza,luTaa,utha,saja. ....etc

radiif---------------do to maza aa jaaye

behar-------------behar-e-ramal musamman makhboon mehzoof
arkaan---faailaatun,failaatun,fail aatun,felun yaa failun
vazan----------2122,1122,1122, 22 yaa 112

ye sb kya hay ??? ye mujhay samajh nahi aya

No.2

jo mukablay ki thread apne lagae hay post osi k quick reply may krni hay ya kisi or jagah ???

can anybody help me plz ???/

[Kanch Ka Dil]

dhazal likhney k kuch asool hotey hain..jis mai kafiya , radeef , beher, inn sab ka khyal rakha jata hai. ager samjh nahi aya toh bataiye...and ap muqabley wali thread mai hi apni ghazla share karain gey

Kanch Ka DIL

apne mukabla tarahi ghazal September ki post ki hay... mujhay samajh nahi aya really

misra-tarah

tum hamei.n zehar pila do to maza aa jaaye
(John Ailiya)

qawaafii---dua,saza,luTaa,utha,saja. ....etc

radiif---------------do to maza aa jaaye

behar-------------behar-e-ramal musamman makhboon mehzoof
arkaan---faailaatun,failaatun,fail aatun,felun yaa failun
vazan----------2122,1122,1122, 22 yaa 112

ye sb kya hay ??? ye mujhay samajh nahi aya

No.2

jo mukablay ki thread apne lagae hay post osi k quick reply may krni hay ya kisi or jagah ???

can anybody help me plz ???/

[kute muskaan]

dhazal likhney k kuch asool hotey hain..jis mai kafiya , radeef , beher, inn sab ka khyal rakha jata hai. ager samjh nahi aya toh bataiye...and ap muqabley wali thread mai hi apni ghazla share karain gey

thank you KKD

may to just likh deta hon or baki itnay mushkil asool hotay hain ye mujhay aaj pata chala hay really :( but its ok... mukablay may to shirkat zaroor kerni hay

ok m going to post there

thank you

[Ghulam Haider]

Aap tamaam aHbaab ka tah e dil se shukriya adaa kartaa hooN ke aap ne meri adnaa si koshish ko pasand kiya, meri himmat afzaaie ki, aur apni khushi ka iZhaar farmaaya. Allah se dua'a kartaa hooN ke aap sab ko khush o khurram, shaad o aabaad rakhe , aur tarqqiyaat meN iZ'aafa farmaaye....