sochnay baitha tujhay to kaisay kaisay dar khulay/taza ghazal...govind sahib ki ghazal par

[Meesam Haidar]

salam dosto...
govind ji ki ghazal say tarha misra lay kar aik ghazal kahi hai aap ki nazr kar raha hoon
umeed hai aap ko passand ayay gi..apni keemti aara say zaroor nawazyay ga
shukrya

Meesam


"sochnay baitha tujhay to kaisay kaisay dar khulay"
hasti-e-tahtuyyara kay aasmaaN tak par khulay

dastras meiN tha kahaN husn--e-nazaara ka fasooN
ik jamal-e-yaar say kitnay nihaaN paikar khulay

tohmatieN sheereiN lagaiN un kay dahan ko nasiha!
jin bala noshoN pay rang-e-meena-o-saghar khulay

manzil-e-tarseel-e-paighaam-e-wafa manzil nahin
chashni to tab hai jab hum par ye naama bar khulay

munqasim karna para apnay dil-e-almaas ko
tab kaheiN ja kar nishan-e-dast-e-sheesha gar khulay

yooN sada aati hai seenay say khayaal-e-ishq par
band sadyooN say para jaisay koi ik ghar khulay

hum wo paband-e-chaman haiN jin ko Meesam* poochnay
nay kbhi koi saba nay hi kabhi sar sar khulay

[Govind Gulshan]

salam dosto...
govind ji ki ghazal say tarha misra lay kar aik ghazal kahi hai aap ki nazr kar raha hoon
umeed hai aap ko passand ayay gi..apni keemti aara say zaroor nawazyay ga
shukrya

Meesam


"sochnay baitha tujhay to kaisay kaisay dar khulay"
hasti-e-tahtuyyara kay aasmaaN tak par khulay

dastras meiN tha kahaN husn--e-nazaara ka fasooN
ik jamal-e-yaar say kitnay nihaaN paikar khulay

tohmatieN sheereiN lagaiN un kay dahan ko nasiha!
jin bala noshoN pay rang-e-meena-o-saghar khulay

manzil-e-tarseel-e-paighaam-e-wafa manzil nahin
chashni to tab hai jab hum par ye naama bar khulay

munqasim karna para apnay dil-e-almaas ko
tab kaheiN ja kar nishan-e-dast-e-sheesha gar khulay

yooN sada aati hai seenay say khayaal-e-ishq par
band sadyooN say para jaisay koi ik ghar khulay

hum wo paband-e-chaman haiN jin ko Meesam* poochnay
nay kbhi koi saba nay hi kabhi sar sar khulay

janaab Meesam Haidar saheb aadab
ye ghazal merii ghazal par nahii hai ,
ye ghazal janaab Dinesh Thakur sahab ki ghazal ki zamiin par hai
vaise bahut achChi ghazal share kii hai aapne
paDhkar bahut lutf aaya kuCh ashaar to bahut pasand aaye

"sochnay baitha tujhay to kaisay kaisay dar khulay"
hasti-e-tahtuyyara kay aasmaaN tak par khulay

dastras meiN tha kahaN husn--e-nazaara ka fasooN
ik jamal-e-yaar say kitnay nihaaN paikar khulay

munqasim karna para apnay dil-e-almaas ko
tab kaheiN ja kar nishan-e-dast-e-sheesha gar khulay

yooN sada aati hai seenay say khayaal-e-ishq par
band sadyooN say para jaisay koi ik ghar khulay

wahhhhh.................. .

aakhiri she'r par kuCh roushnii Daal dei.n
misra-e-saani se mafhoom samajh nahii aa raha hai

shukriya

[Creative Sign]

Bohat Khoob..... Daad Qabool Farmain janab
Bohat Achi Ghazal hey

[Abdus Samad Shaikh]

Walekumsalaam

Bahot khubsurat trahi ghazal pesh ki hy Maseem Sahab.... bahot acha khayal pesh kiya hy aap ne

dhair sari daad qabul kijyae....

[ANTIMA KINGER]

Dinesh Thakur ji sir ke misre par bahut umda
ghazal likhi hai aap ne. kuchh sher to behad
khubsurat hai.n.daad qubuul farmaiye.
keep smiling.

[khawajanazim]

Waah janaab bahut umda ghazal inayat kii hay aapne baaz ashaar bahut purlutf rahey
Daad haazir hay qubool keejiyegaa
Sadaa shaad rahen abaad rahen

[DINESH THAKUR]

"sochnay baitha tujhay to kaisay kaisay dar khulay"
hasti-e-tahtuyyara kay aasmaaN tak par khulay

dastras meiN tha kahaN husn--e-nazaara ka fasooN
ik jamal-e-yaar say kitnay nihaaN paikar khulay

tohmatieN sheereiN lagaiN un kay dahan ko nasiha!
jin bala noshoN pay rang-e-meena-o-saghar khulay

manzil-e-tarseel-e-paighaam-e-wafa manzil nahin
chashni to tab hai jab hum par ye naama bar khulay

munqasim karna para apnay dil-e-almaas ko
tab kaheiN ja kar nishan-e-dast-e-sheesha gar khulay

yooN sada aati hai seenay say khayaal-e-ishq par
band sadyooN say para jaisay koi ik ghar khulay....

kya kehne Meesam sahib...waahh..behad dilkash ghazal
takhleeq kii hai khaaksar ke misre par. tabiyat khush ho
gayi paRh kar..kya khoob ravaani ke saath ashaar khule
haiN...bhai waahh...dil se daad qubool farmaayeN. aur
behtareen likhte raheN. hamesha bahut khush raheN.

[Kanch ki Mehroo]

w'alaikum ussalam..

wahhh.. bohat dilkash kawish rahi Meesam sahib.. Dinesh sahib aur Govind sahib k bad isi zameen maiN aapka bhi itna umdah kalaam daikh kar acha laga.. daad hazir hai..

salamat rahiye..

[ishtiaq zain]

wah,bahot khoob Meesam,bahot dilkash ashaar kahey aap ne janaab Thakur saahib ki zameen maiN,bahot achha laga paRh ke,
sabhi ashaar bahot khoob rahey,aor bahot maza aaya paRh ke,so daad qabool kijiye,
bahot khush rahiye,aor janaab zara jaldi jaldi apna kalaam share kiya kijiye,intazaar rehta hai,

[mdimran_ansari]

W-assalam.....
Bahut Khoob.........
Umdah........