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[Kanwal]

Munjamid nabzon ko lams-e-yaar ki hiddat mili
Khushk dil ki dhadkano’n main ab lahoo dekha gya



Bohat hee khoob likha hey kanwal ..! hamesha ki tarhan ...!

sada khush raho abad raho @};-

thanx @};-

[Aatif Saeed]

/aoa Kanwal Behna!
Billashubba aik behtareen ghazal hai tumharai. Tareef k liya alfaaz nahin haiN mairay paas. Teen misrooN main problem lag rahi hai unahin apni bisaat k hissab se change ker diya hai,

Muntazir theen sadiya’n jis ki bey hisab_o_bey qarar
Aaj wo lamha nazar key rubaroo dekha gya

Muntazir sadiya’n theen jis ki bey hisab_o_bey qarar

Shehr-e-dil ki bhigti galiyo’n main raat dair tak
Bhoola bisra aik chehra roobaroo dekha gya

Shehr-e-dil ki bhigti galiyo’n main kal shabb dair tak

Aankhon key ujley kinaron ko bohat hi dair tak
Khuab-e-jaa’n key iss ziyaa’n par surkh roo dekha gya

Aankh key ujley kinaron ko bohat hi dair tak

Jeeti Raho, Khush Raho,

/AH

Aatif

[Kanwal]

/aoa Kanwal Behna!
Billashubba aik behtareen ghazal hai tumharai. Tareef k liya alfaaz nahin haiN mairay paas. Teen misrooN main problem lag rahi hai unahin apni bisaat k hissab se change ker diya hai,

Muntazir theen sadiya’n jis ki bey hisab_o_bey qarar
Aaj wo lamha nazar key rubaroo dekha gya

Muntazir sadiya’n theen jis ki bey hisab_o_bey qarar

Shehr-e-dil ki bhigti galiyo’n main raat dair tak
Bhoola bisra aik chehra roobaroo dekha gya

Shehr-e-dil ki bhigti galiyo’n main kal shabb dair tak

Aankhon key ujley kinaron ko bohat hi dair tak
Khuab-e-jaa’n key iss ziyaa’n par surkh roo dekha gya

Aankh key ujley kinaron ko bohat hi dair tak

Jeeti Raho, Khush Raho,

/AH

Aatif

walekum salam bhai ji thanx 4 itni zabardast appriciations
aap waqi bohat achey tareeqey se har aik ki takhleeq ko parhtey hain aur guide kartey haqin .
baqi to corrections aap ney sahi ki iska flow nahi toota changing se magar ...Shehr-e-dil ki bhigti galiyo’n main kal shabb dair tak iss main flow kam ho raha hey . isko orignal hi rehney don kia kahayal hey ?

[isha80]

buhat khoob

[Kanwal]

buhat khoob

thanx dear @};-

[tahirraza]

salam

bohoot khooob ..app ki is ghazal nay bohoot impress kia ..thanx for sharing (f)


tahir

[hasil-e-zeest]

bohat khoobsoorat ghazal

[A'nchaL]

Khuahishon ka kanch tootey aik muddat ho gai
Khuahishon ki kirchion main ab lahoo dekha gya


Bohat achay Kanwal Dear /yhug

Khush raho yun hi acha acha likhti raho @};-

[Amna]

thanx amna aapa /jin3

appa

[Diya]

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww /hug2 buhat hi thankoo dear /flower
tussi vi khush raho hamesha

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