tuj bin henae hat rakhti hon bay rang kesay dekh

[bilalinpk]

aslam-o-alaikum friends hmmmmm i am fine or apne taza tareen gazal k sat hazir hon umeed karta hon app ko pasand aay ge
batayeh ga zaroor
or han kanwal nay aik gazal main yeh 2 ulfaz istamal keyeh thay "kesay dekh" main nay bhe in ulfaz per likhnay ki nakam kosish ke hai

[Zialight]

[QUOTE=bilalinpk]

bohot zaburdast Bilal

[bilalinpk]

thanks zialight

[Aaina]

wah Bilal...umdaah kavish hai... ho zor'e qalam aur zada....ameen

aur mashaAllah achi kavishain hain apki...younhi share karte raheye ga.. @};-

[bilalinpk]

thanks Aaina

[BEWAFA]

salaam je
bilashuba ghazal bahut khoobsoorat hey
khayl aur bayan doono hi bahut khob hein
per i think iss k aik do sher mein thori problem hey ab mein khud is qabil nahin k solve ker sakoon tu app is ko cafe mein post ker saktay hein wahan per app ko ziada acha response mila ga
anyways a v impressive effort
khush rahoo
aur likhtay rahooo
Allah hafiz

[A'nchaL]

Bohat Khoob Likha hai Bilal jee aap nay ...

Khush rahain .

[bilalinpk]

thanks ""BEWAFA"" and ""Anchal""