~*~ ek shaam ~*~

[Diya]

very beauuuutiful...

thanks alot daanie

khush raho

[Diya]

khoub pyar se likha hai

/good1

khush raho naz /rose

[Diya]

hello .. bohut khoobsurat nazam hai keep writing n smiling

hi zindagie

tareef ka shukriya /rose

khush rahiyai

[Diya]

bahot acha likha hai diya ..........khush rahen

tareef ka shukriya

khush rahiyai /rose

[Diya]

Diya
mujay aap ke poem k jis jis shair ke samaj aae hai woh to bohat he khub hai
magar problem yeh hai k main aik mukamal poem parhanay say marhom reh gaya mera matlab hai k kuch esay word bi hain jo mujay bilkul samaj nahi aay
aap please apni poetry URDU main compose keya karain
takeh mukamal tor per samje jasakey or perhanay main koe problem na ho
hopping to see u soon

g bilal /rose

aap ki baat par mein ghaur kar rahi hoon ainda insha Allah koshish karoongi isai urdu format mein post karoon

khush rahiyai

[Hashim Raza]

wsalaam aur salaam hashim

umeed rakha karain na.....aur mujhe khushi hui ye jaan kar Khuda aap ki har arzoo puri karai ameen sum ameen /dua

duaoon mein to achai dost hamesha hotai hain bas umeed achi rakhain aap aur khush rahain

/rose

yaqeen manain kabhi kabhi kissi ka kaha hua aik lafz bhi itna dil ko lagta hai kay besakhta ya to aankh bhar aati hai ya dil bohot khush ho jata hai..

jaisa ap ki yeh raply main likhi huee bat parhh kay mujhay laga..

khushh rahin
jeeti rahin

[bilalinpk]

thanks
DIYA

[Diya]

yaqeen manain kabhi kabhi kissi ka kaha hua aik lafz bhi itna dil ko lagta hai kay besakhta ya to aankh bhar aati hai ya dil bohot khush ho jata hai..

jaisa ap ki yeh raply main likhi huee bat parhh kay mujhay laga..

khushh rahin
jeeti rahin

salaam hashim /rose

sahi keh rahai hain aap /rose

/dontsee khush rahiyai

[Diya]

thanks
DIYA

khush rahiyai